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The Last Primal by Shaele

Darkness. The ultimate ruler, the true One-Above-All. Everything starts from it, and everything... Read more
Darkness. The ultimate ruler, the true One-Above-All. Everything starts from it, and everything returns to it eventually. People say that in your final moments, darkness seeps in your very existence, engulfs your whole being. They say it’s an incredibly relaxing feeling that takes you on your journey to your afterlife. They say that in the very darkness, the ‘nothingness’ your weary soul will finally be able to rest and relax. This brings up some very philosophical and existential questions. Do you even exist?

Follow the epic journey of Aiden, the last primal, a unique and ancient race as he finds his place in a strange, new world, filled with threats and violence. Collapse
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    voided
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    Story is constantly switching perspectives from chapter to chapter. Multiple storylines going on at the same time and broken up between random chapters. Very disjointed.
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    Fast_sec
    20
    Novel is not too bad, there are too many buts and wtf moments. Very similar to "My life as a slime", not in a good way though. I feel like the author forces un-needed scenarios onto the MC just to prolong the story. There is really no need to lock the MC's memory since he already has whole bunch of cheats. MC is an emotional mess. MC has these quick power burst moments, like in DragonBall Z but it's just all bark no bite. The brother/sister complex gets annoying fast. A lot of cliche scenarios as well. I would not recommend this novel. The only way I was able to continue reading was skipping chapters to the point where I just got disinterested.
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    lonedevs
    10
    Went normal till 40-50 - chap then got confused wtf is going by 100 -chap
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    Hedache
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    Well, the narration itself is well done, at least the author knows how to close the holes in the logic. But the protagonist is something especially quiet, content and innocent. There are gaps in the development of the plot, since at first it seemed to him that a clear goal was given,
    development. And then it turns out that this is a fabulous boy with a bunch of extra relationships, like a magic sister who, like Mary Popence, almost gets buns out of thin air. Very similar to the not very successful imitation of the novel "Evolution from Nothing".
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    Dragonslayer4466
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    the mc makes so many odd decisions and
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    har123
    10
    Chapter 1 and already confused this story already begins with something that everyone will hate is that the world will revolve around the MC because it has a kind of destiny out of the bottom of the author's ass that makes it unique, great that even the creator talks with him familiarly and is ready to get him out of samsara just 3 for that and why tell us all this stuff that serves to nothing in chapter 1 everyone knows what a Level system is but it takes us the plot armor of the unique And can therefore become stronger by killing others.
    Too confused far too confused with the world that revolves around the MC from the very first chapter and the MC who pretends everything was normal we tell him that the creator brought him back from samsara because he is there only race that the creator did not create and he says nothing to ask what the creator wants from him, for him everything is fine he is a kind of chosen one with a system
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    Omnis Ra
    42
    This is not a good story to read it is a hodge podge of everything rolled into a load of crap. It was really hard to follow.
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    CreedOfUnity
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    So confused… what is this about?
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