Cathulhu Online, MUNYA! by DamnPlotArmor

the story isn't too bad and it's readable but in terms of content it's basically 80% status screens, 15% cringy sentence enders (shit got old by chapter II), and 5% plot. the author also has a very weird vision of slavery

Rank: B+

Guys i have a couple of novel ideas

1.
In this universe all planet with life in it will drift alone in their orbit like our earth. But whenever their solar system crosses another one. There is a chance of a another planet with life attaching to the solar system and orbit around the star on an orbit close to the original planet. This causes a drastic change in the way of life on both the planets. Each planet gets their own power system. Totally random power systems. and a set of rules is thrust upon them. Whenver a person becomes 18 he or she should travel to the other planet to find their mate. They can cultivate their power from am young age. There is no restrictions. One can only choose a spoise when they are truly in love with each other as judged by the world. But if they choose a spouse then they are locked together forever unless you kill your spouse with your hands. Furthermore when they finalize their lover they sync up together to have a hybrid power system that is vastly superior and they should choose a planet to settle down.

That is just the world structure. Actual story revolves around the reason of law of duality and what purpose one has for such a complicated system to be in place. How can one have higher power and also the dynamics between different twin-planets.

2.There are two ways to become an immortal. you can either be a god or the devil.

So basically all souls are left to live their life in a normal world like earth. At the end of their lives they are judged to see how good or evil they are. A saint will be reincarnated in a better version of the same world but which has magic. The new world will not be a paradise but it will have a better government and stuff, but evil will still be present. On the other hand the murders and serial killers in the original world will also be reincarnated in a world of magic but the world order is way more harsher than the original world. The people are crueler and for the weak it is like walking on thin eggshells. After each death the souls will climb up or down the scale of paradise to hell.

Lets say there are 666 worlds, and the original world is at 333 while Hell is 0 and heaven at 666. After the deaths in worlds after 433 and below 233 they can start leaving messages to their next reincarnation to reinforce their idealogy. By the last 133 worlds the gifted they will start to have immense power and some of the memories from past incarnations. By the last 75 worlds they will remember enough to question their idealogy. Was being a saint always nice? Even when a person slaps your cheek you need to have the patience to forgive. You should have the generosity to even help your enemy. The memories of hundreds of lives will also include hundreds of tragedies they faced trying when trying to be a goof person. It is enough to push a person down the scale to hell.
At the same time is being a villain for hundreds of incarnations easy?For all he knows he killed a guy by accident during his first life. Maybe he was a coward who betrayed his friend in his 5 th life. When he starts getting back his memory he may feel the remorse from killing the billions that he had to , to come to this world.

A sin is an emotionless entity which judges the consequences of your action. Only when the person understand how to manipulate their value of sin, can they truly traverse to the ends of the scale.

You can mess up this story by introducing an mc with a system that helps him. Or you can make it about redemption of a devil or the fall of a god to have an OP to Super OP mc. You can also have a base mc who has a small cheat and a witty mind that makes him OP

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