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The Author's POV by Entrail_JI

The person whom the world revolves around.

The person who defeats all of his opponents,... Read more
The person whom the world revolves around.

The person who defeats all of his opponents, and ultimately gets the beautiful girl.

The sole existence all villains fear.

That is the protagonist.

What about me?

As a failed author who had only one success throughout his whole career, I had reincarnated into my late novel.

«This is it»

I thought, as I tightly clenched my fist.

Did I just get reincarnated in my own novel?

Is this where I reincarnate in a novel and become the protagonist?

No.

Sadly it’s not that kind of novel, as I reincarnated as a mob.

The world doesn’t revolve around me.

The girls don’t come flocking towards me.

The cheat items don’t come to me.

«Phew»

I let out a sigh of relief.

«Thank god I’m not the protagonist»

I joyfully shouted as tears streamed down my cheeks.

Wait, are you curious as to why I don’t want to be the protagonist?

I did forget to mention the most important thing when I was describing a protagonist.

That is…

They are calamity magnets.

I just died. If I learned something from that, it’s that it really isn’t a pleasant experience.

If possible let me live a long stable life.

Thank you, whoever reincarnated me.

I would later come to regret these words…

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Reader Disclaimer:

There are two MCs in this story.
1. The original MC of the novel
2. The author that transmigrates in the novel
In the beginning, the author plays the role of an extra with no ambition other than quietly waiting for the story to end. He is almost like a babysitter that watches over the plotline, however, this will only be in the first 40 chapters or so as he will soon be dragged into the plotline regardless of how much he doesn’t want to.

The MC may come off as someone that has no ambition in the beginning but as the story progresses it will change

Also, there may be a bit of info-dumping at the beginning of the novel (at least the first 30 chapters), but there shouldn’t be anymore in the following chapters. Well…being a new author I may end up doing it again. If I do so please do criticize me and scold me. If you don’t scold me how am I supposed to improve the story? What’s great about writing web novels is that I actually can hear your advice and opinions. You are just as much invested in this story as I am, so please help me out.

Well…I would appreciate it if you don’t leave a one star…not that I can stop you

Also, yes, the novel is inspired by TNE (The novel’s extra) you may see a lot of similarities in the beginning, but for future chapters the differences will start to become more apparent. I hope you manage to stick through it. Also, don’t come reading this expecting it to be another TNE. In fact don’t compare the two. If you do, the flaws of this book will become more apparent as you read ruining the whole experience Collapse
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    Eat eating ate
    59
    WARNING!!!!!!!!!!
    The author is a rather new author so be patient in the first parts of the story it will get better
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      Oddy
      50
      If by any chance you meant the first 300 chapters or so, then yeah, maybe it will get better... or your tolerance for bad writing gets somewhat used to whatever the hell it is.
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    Sawfish
    54
    I read the story only because it was similar/a copy of the novel extra yeah lately the first chapters are almost the same also as the main characters an other copy of the novel extra which. I didn't like
    I love the novel extra that's why I started reading this but don't like reading a copy the same thing with different names
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      Wizard
      04
      and what kind of novel was that you read before, what was its name?
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        Sawfish
        20
        the novel extra
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          Rakuean
          50
          It is true this novel has been influenced by The Novel's Extra but it slowly deviates as the story progresses. That said, it'll only happen after you past through the hellish early chapters but it gets better the more you read
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    Kalabam
    91
    I found that a lot of the story felt much like a disappointment and only after a certain point in the story did I feel like I enjoyed it and wasn't forcing myself to continue reading thinking "it's going to get better"
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    Mao Miaomiao
    1912
    Hello fellow readers, Here's a list of my recommended novels (Updated):
    Top 1% :https://ranobes.top/user/Mao+Miaomiao/favorites/128827/
    Top R-18 :https://ranobes.top/user/Mao+Miaomiao/favorites/128814/
    Top Translated :https://ranobes.top/user/Mao+Miaomiao/favorites/128801/
    Intelligent MC :https://ranobes.top/user/Mao+Miaomiao/favorites/128800/
    Hope you guys recommend any good novel I may have missed. Ciao.
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      SeriousReal
      736
      why are you spamming this on every listed popular novel? for attention? you want our attention? can we have admins attention here and ban this kid who misbehaves.
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        arshimttal2000
        260
        From what i've seen he only posts this comment for books that are on his list. Plus the list itself is pretty well made, so I dont see any reason to be annoyed much about it.
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          SeriousReal
          37
          he posted r18 novels at the invisible dragon.... you cant excuse that.. Which also proves you havent seen much yet of this guys activity.
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        Cactus_Cool
        30
        his list is pretty damn good actually, I don't see the problem with it.
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          SeriousReal
          28
          Not sure whats on the list but adults are talking about spamming shouldnt be encouraged.
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            Cactus_Cool
            01
            Are you calling me a child lol I'm 18.
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              SeriousReal
              04
              no i was saying youre not an adult, now we know youre a manchild.
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                Cactus_Cool
                31
                Yea and you're an immature troll on the internet.
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                  SeriousReal
                  02
                  if thats what you call literate, sure
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                  galacticrize
                  30
                  this persons braincellshas degraded below mentally braindead
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        Rnailo
        50
        if you don't even bother with finding out what he is posting.. then stop saying it is a spam

        what he is sharing is his list of novels (bookmarked/favourited) according to the topics. Take it as a recommended list to read. You would have to be a serious dickhead with agenda to take fault with Miaomiao.
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          SeriousReal
          18
          You read my reply, and you still claim i didnt check it out? Besides this was spammed and a propagatable comment/opinion thats been posted everywhere. By your logic complaints on a criticism on all of this guys post shouldnt matter either.
          be glad we only have a few of these list spammers for now before you change your tune
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            shadow_suicine
            00
            Even if he's spamming it's not as bad as you made it seem broo..and that's only thing he could to spread his recommendation.. I mean there are no common forum where he could post otherwise and it's not like the spam is inappropriate or something.. take a chill pill bro😂😂
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      Get out of here you sht always spamming
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    POPCORN_DEMON
    248
    Fu#k f#ck f#ck me.
    I tried it.
    I don't think i can continue it.
    It has already been 17 times i tried to read it but every time i reach CHAPTER 50
    I go insane.
    That level of idk stupidity/immaturity.
    Bullshit. I can't handle it.
    Mc is pedophilic masochistic.
    Who is 32 yrs old but enjoys suppression
    from 16 yrs old psychotic slut. And her character is f#cking annoying.

    Many said it gets better but i can't continue.
    I came here to heal my soul but it keeps getting more injured now i want to see blood lots of blood.

    For the love of gods this will be the last time i clicked this shit.
    Amen
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      kumb
      380
      Tried 17 times

      You sound more of a masochist than the MC.
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      Kalabam
      80
      I understand what you mean. I had to force myself to continue reading. I'm all caught up now but I can't help but feel that I wasted time
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    Rakuean
    60
    Author: Release frequency will be back to normal soon. It’s just this part that’s really difficult for me to write since I have to connect all the previous parts and everything, and I can’t make any mistakes.

    Its the most critical and important moment of the series that'll be a huge turning point
    - He can take all the time in the world as long as it doesn't messes up the story
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      Hansbk
      50
      Totally agree... Quality over quantity... I have dozens of sh*tty novels lined up to take this novel's place while waiting.
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    Rakuean
    41
    PROS: Good story with a smooth plot progression and certain characters feels alive but only after you read past the academy arc
    - Fighting scenes are average and easy to understand but it's not fascinating enough to make you sweat
    - The way how the story will go is predictable but SIKE! lshock The author will suddenly pull off a plot twist sometimes
    - MC is not a pussy and goes through character development for each hardship he overcomes

    CONS: Focuses mostly on the mc which makes the existing other characters seems like nothing but someone who would only appear when necessary
    - Story is good but the author often forgets about characters. Dwarves and other races became irrelevant. It feels like the whole purpose of this novel is just about defeating Jezebeth which is the Demon King
    - The mc uses his knowledge as an author but interferes frequently in a battle between S-ranked powerhouses whose power are tremendous but plot armor is invincible(It may sound cliche but no more after you learn of the shocking truth
    )

    Overall 7/10. Honestly, it would've been a lot better if the author focused on other characters and its world building rather than the mc himself most of the time but it's still a good novel nonetheless considering the author uploads 1 chapter per day. I hope the author writes another novel after this ends

    Writing quality and character development slowly improves as the story goes on. The romance were also written well since it took a long time to develop. I've certainly enjoyed my time here and will also re-read it in the future. Honestly, it's getting better and better the more you read but will also require patience especially on the early chapters. Hope it helped and have fun
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      Tugx
      10
      I haven't read that much but please spoil me *SPOILERS* what you mean by other Ren?
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      shadow_suicine
      10
      Actually calling it world building is half correct the Author was very visual and descriptive about the world...the world just lacks culture of I say so.
      About giving side characters having more time...I made peace with it by thinking that the novel's name is "Author's POV" but tbh I agree with you 👍
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    bywah
    94
    Honestly, Im not that great in voicing out the reasons on why I have problems with or why i like a certain a certain story. I just know what i like and what i dont. And for me, there's nothing amazing with the story that genuinely makes me want to keep reading and begging for the next chapter. Plotholes are everywhere. Also it kind of feel likes the power of everyone isnt that different? The fights are boring similar to Throne of Magical Arcana, but at least here they are actually fighting instead of artifacts deciding on who wins. It's a story to read when you are bored and dont have something else to read. I rate 6-10
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      sonicslow
      132
      I feel you, man. I don't understand what all this hype is about. The story is not all that fascinating in terms of plot; world-building is ok, and the characters are not that great imo. One of my biggest problems is that the author made a fcking op skill the lowest rank so that Mc could get it early. In addition, some story developments make me cringe (like the first few times he started using the chess analogies, acting like some 10th-dimensional mastermind when he's just making simple plots, the CRINGE ARGHHH). I think this story is not for me
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        kumb
        48
        There is hype for this story for a very good reason. All the things you’ve listed are not random, and on purpose.
        You and the other guy just haven’t gotten to the part where all dots are connected and everything is explained.
        Tbh, I’m kind of lazy to explain. So,
        You can either drop and never find out why there is hype for the story, or just continue reading.
        Either way, it’s your choice.
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          Penguin
          50
          Hype for this novel keeps from beginning when it was straight copy of the novel's extra. And fans keep talking that not fans should read till latest chaps to get hype.
          When will it come to end you guys will say that we should read till end to get it?
          I was get baited this "you don't reach right part" two times but it's still just ok-average novel for me.
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            kumb
            02
            Well, I got told the same thing for LOTM and after 200 parts I enjoyed it. The beginning was quite frankly extremely boring as the author would spend paragraph describing bills and forniture.

            So I really don’t understand your argument.
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              Penguin
              30
              Lotm has only one 'barrier' in the end of arc 1 and it's only about 120 (10% of novel). Moreover this 'boring' parts is worldbuilding.
              This one you should read till 'latest chapters'. More chapters released more chapter we should read and time we should get hype everytime changed. Right now you talk us to read entire novel with 550+ chaps to understand why this one is masterpiece but not okish. And this 550+ not plane worldbuilding or smth it's already half of story.
              So i got question: Do you (and others) will continue talk about reading till latest chapters even when it will be ended? Because right now look like you will do.
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                kumb
                02
                There is hype for this story for a very good reason. All the things you’ve listed are not random, and on purpose.
                You and the other guy just haven’t gotten to the part where all dots are connected and everything is explained.
                Tbh, I’m kind of lazy to explain. So,
                You can either drop and never find out why there is hype for the story, or just continue reading.
                Either way, it’s your choice.


                Please point out to me when in here I said anything about reading till the latest chapters, or any of the things you mentioned.
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                  Penguin
                  30
                  i was talk not about only you but about most of fans of this novel and i pointed it many times.

                  If you want qoute your words, that's it:
                  You and the other guy just haven’t gotten to the part where all dots are connected and everything is explained.

                  So where this right part where everything connected? It's not straight "latest chaps" but still have meaning like this. Just like "You still don't feel masterpiece? Read more! Don't get it so far? You don't read enough!".
                  And this "part where everything connected" move far and far with every new chapter author write. That's my point. Lotm about 150, WMW about 300 and so and so but this one doesn't have even approximate number when novel go boom and become really interesting. And i talk not about today but also month before and half year before. Answers didn't change from appearing novel on this site.
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                  kumb
                  05
                  The dots connect at least 200 chapters before the lastest chapters so i have no idea what you are talking about.
                  that's my point. Lotm about 150, WMW about 300 and so and so but this one doesn't have even approximate number when novel go boom and become really interesting.


                  Not much of a point when everyone has different points.
                  I can say chapter 70, some can say chapter 1, some other chapter 250, and so on.
                  For me LOTM is the most boring at around 150 and only at 200 does it start becoming good.

                  Also, my point was reffering to the previous points the other guy made. All I said that the problems he found were explained later and not random. Whether he read it or not, I dont' care. Didn't you literally see me tell him to drop it if he didn't have the patience to get to the part where all is explained?
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        Deluxe.
        14
        You dont read the latest chapter right? because everything you just said is explain and theres super big reason why he act that.
        read the la
        test chapter before talking shit
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          Rnailo
          70
          to be fair I am going to quote my favourite youtuber.
          you don't have to reach 100hours/chapters to get to the good stuff, if beginning is shit then story is not good either.

          I did read this story a lot in the beginning but then it kind of wore me down so I get what the people above are saying, story and plot is good, but is quite monotonous so if you try to binge it can just be boring, I tried picking it up again but after few chapters I decided to stop as it was not really worth it.
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            Rhino
            27
            hehe, I can only pity you and the others.
            Everything just got revealed and the story officially became peak.
            Mindblown.
            Not that it matters since you won't see it, alongside the others.
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              Rnailo
              81
              true, I wont but that means I saved tons of hours of my life boast

              as they say if you dont know what you missed, you wont feel left out.
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          SeriousReal
          21
          did you not read to the latest chapter? you only keep reading to make sense of things but it gets too convoluted, and i dropped it when both mc becomes unhinged.

          There is no greater plan, that is just a long term bait while a sub npc is causing unrelated issues, a subtle manipulated conscious, every character except for Donna maybe is unhinged.

          its a potluck pot misfortune chaotic mess for word count. just so you can read on to untie this deadknot mess or until the story flips the table.

          It would be even worst if you tell ppl its by design, "bad writing" wouldnt even cover half of it.
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      Novelish manul
      80
      It's funny to see people say 'you just haven't seen the latest chapter you talk shit....' Why would someone want to read the latest chapter of the novel they don't want to read at all? I don't get this masochism.
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        Rnailo
        60
        truer words can not be said welldone
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        kumb
        05
        If you read the second part of his message, it says something about all of his problems being explained and everything being revealed (which is true)
        If you have watched death note, then a good reference would be when Light forgets his memory.
        People say that those parts aren’t the best, but at the end of the day, it was all build up for the climax, which is where the story is atm.
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          Rnailo
          40
          You really can't compare this to death note.

          its been a while since I came in contact with it
          But lets try, I believe in Death Note, what you get is a good beginning and story build-up with nothing too confusing or messed up and then you get a twist and also good middle part and build-up.

          Here you get shit beginning, worse middle part and even more confusing plotlines and in the end you guys are telling us it leads up to some big reveal ?

          You have to understand that all that 400-500 chapters of mediocrity is not really something I look forward to reading or spending my time on, even if there is some semi good conclusion to this. But what I hear from others who have read on its not even that great and confusion is still at galore.

          So I once again say, no thanks I will take my time and life elsewhere. There are plenty of bad/good worse timewasters out there to read and look for.

          PS. I know I over exaggerated by saying that this novel is shit and so on, but I was just trying to make my point. It is not as bad as I made it out to be, but it isn't good nor just worth my time either.
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    SeriousReal
    52
    character building and setting is fine but there is a major writing flaw on creating drama in the novel. There isnt a proper setup, climax, denuement, the story srarts off as any other novel and it slowly draws you into a mire of strife and insanity. setups and issues popping up like weeds, and climaxes appearing in setups and endings. the dramas piles up constantly with no real conclusions. To the point you realize that this happens because every character becomes unhinged at some point, including the main characters. yes its so convoluted that you can argue this book has 2 mcs. They are both insane.
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    POOR READER
    20
    Oracle paths and The Primal hunter
    These two novels are very well done if you are caught with the latest chapters of Author pov like I am .can give a try
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      Daoist Ghoul
      41
      Primal Hunter is shit, too boring and monotonous novel. Haven't read Oracle Path yet so can't say
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        sonicslow
        10
        I second that
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        Hansbk
        10
        Oracle Path is better than primal hunter imo.... At least I enjoyed when it was first realesed I don't know how it develop now.

        But currently My top 1 novel is Shadow Slave... After so many years reading this is the first time it become so easy to decide what's the top 1 for me... It's just that good ehh (If u read it, then u'll know)
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          shashank panthri
          00
          wht is good about shadow slave? I have been delaying reading it for the longest time, because I just can't start it. Please tell me something about it that will make my ape brain start the novel.
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