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The Author's POV by Entrail_JI

The person whom the world revolves around.

The person who defeats all of his opponents,... Read more
The person whom the world revolves around.

The person who defeats all of his opponents, and ultimately gets the beautiful girl.

The sole existence all villains fear.

That is the protagonist.

What about me?

As a failed author who had only one success throughout his whole career, I had reincarnated into my late novel.

«This is it»

I thought, as I tightly clenched my fist.

Did I just get reincarnated in my own novel?

Is this where I reincarnate in a novel and become the protagonist?

No.

Sadly it’s not that kind of novel, as I reincarnated as a mob.

The world doesn’t revolve around me.

The girls don’t come flocking towards me.

The cheat items don’t come to me.

«Phew»

I let out a sigh of relief.

«Thank god I’m not the protagonist»

I joyfully shouted as tears streamed down my cheeks.

Wait, are you curious as to why I don’t want to be the protagonist?

I did forget to mention the most important thing when I was describing a protagonist.

That is…

They are calamity magnets.

I just died. If I learned something from that, it’s that it really isn’t a pleasant experience.

If possible let me live a long stable life.

Thank you, whoever reincarnated me.

I would later come to regret these words…

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Reader Disclaimer:

There are two MCs in this story.
1. The original MC of the novel
2. The author that transmigrates in the novel
In the beginning, the author plays the role of an extra with no ambition other than quietly waiting for the story to end. He is almost like a babysitter that watches over the plotline, however, this will only be in the first 40 chapters or so as he will soon be dragged into the plotline regardless of how much he doesn’t want to.

The MC may come off as someone that has no ambition in the beginning but as the story progresses it will change

Also, there may be a bit of info-dumping at the beginning of the novel (at least the first 30 chapters), but there shouldn’t be anymore in the following chapters. Well…being a new author I may end up doing it again. If I do so please do criticize me and scold me. If you don’t scold me how am I supposed to improve the story? What’s great about writing web novels is that I actually can hear your advice and opinions. You are just as much invested in this story as I am, so please help me out.

Well…I would appreciate it if you don’t leave a one star…not that I can stop you

Also, yes, the novel is inspired by TNE (The novel’s extra) you may see a lot of similarities in the beginning, but for future chapters the differences will start to become more apparent. I hope you manage to stick through it. Also, don’t come reading this expecting it to be another TNE. In fact don’t compare the two. If you do, the flaws of this book will become more apparent as you read ruining the whole experience Collapse
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    zzzzzzz
    01
    good
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    TheShift
    204
    Based on Chapter 518, my thoughts are :

    1) Characters: All of the main gang and MC (author) have unique and distinct personalities, each with their own seperate goals so they don't stick together unnecessarily.

    2) Power structure: Fleshed out early on, using the the alphabetical ranking format, namely; SSS, SS, S, A, B, C, D, E, F and G, G being the lowest rank.

    Each individual rank is divided into 3 minor realms, for example in S rank; S+, S, and S-, S- being the initial realm, S being mid, and S+ being peak.

    All humans have access to a status panel like a system that shows them their stats, including their genetic potential (max rank attainable) which is usually unchangeable and absolute unless in extremely rare circumstances.

    3) World building: Pretty good, with non human races like Elves, Dwarves, Orcs, and demons, demons being the common enemy to all races.

    The human society is set in a futuristic setting, with a proper modern government controlling humanity, though you have strong private families calling themselves 'nobles' and some abusing their powers , which the government may or may not care about depending on the usefulness of the victim.

    Their world does have dungeons that pop up and guilds to control them, but the story mainly revolves around Human VS Human rather than PVE.

    4) MC's 'self insert' aspect into his own novel is done fairly well, with MC trying not to mess with his original storyline as much as possible.

    5) Romance: Done well for both the MC (author) and the novel MC (protagonist), being well paced and realistic considering they are not even 22 years old yet, so they have better things to do then worrying about their love life, considering humanity is facing extinction.

    Also none of that garbage forced romance due to being drugged and forced to do 'it' to save the female partners.

    Considering their society is based on a modern western style society, romance is formed on the modern western dating style, with no arranged marriage drama, at least for the main gang.

    SIDE NOTE: I can't say more without going into spoiler territory.
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      Young Master Supreme
      12
      Thanks for the review!
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    narayan
    46
    i read till 518.. and honestly one of the best novels i have read in fantasu genre..... there is no usual cliff like both our mc and novel mc hide something from each other making there relation unstable... i especially like it when they both just came out clean ....... normally i hate it when mc reveals any of his secret to his friends... but seeing how story developed i myself thought that mc should reveal his secret to that one friend... hats-off for changing my opinions.... i am going to webnovel to donate some things to our author..
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    MariaX
    32
    This novel is amazing
    I love all the characters
    The plot from chapter 400-420 is just so good
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    Chronepsis
    30
    Is the romance gud?
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      Rakuean
      429
      Nah, the story is great but the romance is an absolute no. Even if a thousand chapters were spent developing it, there's no hope at all. It's one of those series that is good without romance
      . Aight, I should say no more or else those guys will be mad at me for visiting this place so much despite criticizing it
      Recommendations with good romance:
      - Ending Maker(also has manhwa with beautiful art)
      - The Novel's Extra
      - Martial Arts Master
      - The Villain Wants To Live
      - Douluo Dalu(just watch the anime)
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        Rhino
        68
        ????
        How can u even say that when there is 0 romance up to the point you read?
        Romance literally starts from eleven arc on.
        Please stop spreading misinformation as you have not even reached the romance part.
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          Rakuean
          89
          Pfft, pls tell me how the romance even progressed? I've read until chapter 355 and I've seen a lot of readers shipping Amanda x Ren but they literally talked for less than 100 words with each other
          . There are also other ships but just give it up, the romance is hopeless here. Even I a teenager who has no experience can tell this is better off without romance(not like there is any anyway lol)
          - at least try to support your statement with a reasoning or something. You look like someone who really want to protect what is precious to them without using their brain like luffy from one piece. Also if you are telling that I have not even reached the romance part then where the f*ck does it even start?? Over chapter 355+?? Pfft, how beautifully well done~
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            Rhino
            510
            Me : There is no romance until elven arc which is next arc.
            You : Long speech talking about something else entirely.
            Who is the one that looks stupid now lol?
            Kid, if you're looking for a fight, at least properly read what i wrote. Also, you can't classify a girl falling for MC as romance when the MC doesn't even like her.
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              Rakuean
              34
              I was looking for some fun but seems like it backfired. I admit it, i lose this discussion since I've become assertive and only made my points based on what i know. thanks for the lesson ig. Welp, a romance this late at the story is still not my type
              - also, edit your previous comment since it's written Eleven arc rather than Elven or whatever arc that was
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                Rhino
                34
                Well fair enough, I did misspell it.
                Also, the romance is not technically that late. In terms of chapters, yes, but in terms of timeline, it's around 3 years?
                Other than that, there is simply no romance until the elven arc which starts at around chapter 370?
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                  Chronepsis
                  03
                  Well is it any good tho? Idc bout late romance cuz i rather prefer that than a random girl on the street falling for mc at every turn and mc accept all of em. And is it harem? Ik theres no harem tag but you can never be too sure ya know?
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                  ragnarock
                  23
                  The romance is quite good.
                  It’s not rushed, and it’s not random. Very slow burned, and isn’t the main focus of the novel.
                  There is no harem.
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                  Chronepsis
                  12
                  That sounds like my cup of tea. Thx bro bow
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                  Typicaly
                  01
                  Can you spoil me on who the waifu is?
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                  kumb
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                  MrNightCrawler
                  01
                  or maybe that demon(matriarch of the charm clan), I don't remember her name
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              shashank panthri
              01
              mc doesn't like amanda? I thought they started dating. I am not caught up with the updates but my interest in the novel was decreasing so I am trying to find if in any case amanda does not end up with ren, then I would push myself to read the story. I hate their ship. Amanda as a character and her interactions with ren are bland at best and utter boring at best.
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            gdvndr
            01
            Chill bruv
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        Loenly Barge
        01
        Dude, I loved martials arts master. It was one of the first few webnovels I had read and it was so amazing!
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      JeanFF
      01
      yep
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    Rakuean
    1116
    I've read until chapter 355 but for some reason I can't help but continue reading with no interest at all. Reading this feels more of a chore since I invested a lot of time but it's really becoming boring. The series just feel so drag-on
    Before you complain that I am saying bs, listen to my reasoning first: What I really like about novels is the plot and characters' interactions with each other but this novel is becoming dull for me. The idea of having the protagonist meddle in a battle between a lot of powerhouses in the world just seems so absurd. The enemies he faces are those who are usually around his rank so ye, its plot armor. things always seem to be on the mc's cause.
    - It would've been great if the author fleshed out the characters since they feel so one dimensional. The characters only exist for the protagonist and plot's convenience. The world background and the story are fantastic but as the series goes on it's turning bland and unexciting. The events are so predictable and the book Kevin got is pfft🤣- the idea of Kevin preventing Ren from ceasing to exist may seem touching to you all but It's just so forced it made me think 'wew, plot armor and friendship at its finest'
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      kumb
      12
      If you want to stop reading, I recommend you stop at chapter 400 where there's like an enormous twist (You will find out secrets about the world and reincarnation). From there, you will understand everything that the author was trying to do,
      it's only like 45 chaps. See for yourself.
      Also, you clearly missed the point in the Kevin book thing. The point was to show that Ren was connected to the system he has.
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      Kimbulla
      411
      Lol, this comment is quite laughable.
      Especially if you read up to 400. Predictable?
      This story is the furthest thing from predictable. There’s literally a twist every turn.
      Meddle with powerhouses? Heh, he only fights with people his rank, there is something called a brain which MC uses and that’s how he is able to meddle, but it isn’t as though he does something absurd and fights S ranks with his strenght.
      Plot armor? I wish MC actually had more. He always suffers or dies.
      1D characters? You clearly can’t differentiate between characters that are just there for Mc and characters that have their own goals and ambitions and don’t revolve around MC.
      The idea of Kevin saving Ren sounds forced? It was for shadowed like 50 chaps before when he got the book, and I hope you are not stupid enough to think that it’s just a random event put out there for no reason, right?
      Did you like not notice how the system straight up told Kevin that Ren was going to die? Shouldn’t that be a clear indication that Ren is connected to the system?????
      All I will say is that you should read up to 400, and then realize just how laughable ur whole comment was.
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        Rakuean
        32
        Escaping and dealing a huge damage to Monolith
        - I wish MC actually had more plot armor? pfft, if that is not plot armor then what is it?
        The war with the dwarves and the infiltration were splendidly well done, especially the unexpected twist at the end however the identity of Karl is literally the most perfect one you could ever disguised to when infiltrating
        - this is where things always seems to be on the mc's cause comes in
        As for the one dimensional characters. I won't say its lacking in drama and moments that makes me sentimental because its not that kind of novel at all and I do agree that not all characters rotate around mc but they all are so plain and only appears for the mc's convenience. Kevin? ye, he is a good friend cuz the power of friendship even saved Ren. Amanda? I don't even know how most of you ship him with mc. Melissa? personally ship him with Ren mainly because their interactions are entertaining but she is nothing but utility for mc and I realized that after most of the characters introduced in the early chapters had no worth at all but their talent to defeat the final boss. As for Jin, I'm really impressed with his growth but at the end of the day, he only exists as a force to be reckoned with.

        What's I'm saying is, a series with a great story isn't that fun at all to read without depth in characters. What's the point of reading a series where the protagonist achieves what they want but the people around him are just those who has only existed to help him achieve his dream/ambition
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          Kimbulla
          13
          If you can, just read up to chapter 400. I won't say anymore after that. You will realize why I said what I said.
          Although you should prepare yourself to get a headache.
          Also, using Monolith as example for plot armor isn't really the best since there were logical actions to his escape. He didn't get random powerups, nor items. He did it through psychological battle and items he previously had.
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            Rakuean
            01
            I am extremely biased on this comment of mine so I apologize for that. I was expecting some sort of ruckus to start but you've decided to take a step back instead; how boring.
            - I'll at least try to read up until chapter 400+ and decide if it's really worth the read or not
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              Kimbulla
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              Yes. You don’t even have to read that much. Just like 45 chaps. If by then u still don’t like it, then it can’t be helped. But at least u will realize why I said what I said.
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      Acedia.
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      i agree to your last statement that some characters are dull and they just exists for the main cha, there are also several times where you'll think that the reason he's alive is because of plot armor— but it's not
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        Acedia.
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        i don't hate your comment or anything like everyone has different tastes and preferences just try reading until the author revealed that someone is controlling the scenarios and events
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          Acedia.
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          if that still doesn't pique your interest and you find the novel bland.
          well i can't do anything about it
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            Rakuean
            12
            Thanks for being understanding but for me; a novel that brings me to tears is a good one but this hasn't been able to make me feel that way. I see a lot of readers saying that I should read more but my interest had already died
            - I do agree that everyone has their own preferences thus I don't really resent those that disagree/disliked with my opinion/comment since I respect their taste. Enjoy reading and I hope you don't lose interest to those things you love currently.
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              ragnarock
              10
              If you’re looking for tears, the reunion is pretty darn tearful.
              Tbh, people are telling you to continue reading for a very darn good reason. But you shouldn’t force yourself to read.

              There is a very good reason why this novel ranks number 1 in light novel pub above all other novels, including TBATE. It’s because shit becomes insane.
              Especially when u realize the truth of the world, and how everything was a full circle.
              Mind blowin shit.
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              Acedia.
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              i don't know remember any novels that can make me cry, uhhh but if there's one novel that i'm amazed is the "Night's Nomenclature"
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                Acedia.
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                i can't explain it, but i'm sure the story is alive


                of course not literally
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    Aneilyn
    20
    #panic# can you reupload the first 60 chapter? Because the author has has changed quite a lot in those chapters
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    Eren
    11
    The one thing about this novel is Ending wil be happy considering how story rolls always
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      narayan
      00
      it will........... even if author kills anyone.. he can just make mc time travel...!
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    kkkk
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    panda-novel.com has been updated, I am still here waiting for the update
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    Cornbringer
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    Wow...the latest chapter has me sitting on the edge, will press conference 3 also be uploaded tonight?
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