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World Keeper by karami92

Dale Mitchell, your average guy in a below-average job. But, what happens to him is anything but... Read more
Dale Mitchell, your average guy in a below-average job. But, what happens to him is anything but average. After hitting someone in his truck, his world was turned upside down, inside out, and more than fifty shades of grey.

Now, he seems to be something called a World Keeper, and must create and manage his own world. Is this his afterlife, or something else entirely? Collapse
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    lucasjcastelo
    20
    It's sad because the potential of this is really high, but the MC is so useless that there's no way to read this if you're not a horny teenager. I mean, besides him "creating" the goddesses to f#ck, what else did he do? The entire direction of the world is practically decided by the System's assistant, it's too frustrating, MC with no attitude, lazy and stupid.
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    abishek narayanan
    10
    I am at chapter 300, and i have to say the MC is feels more like a figurehead for and the other gods just manipulate him to get their ways . Mainly his assistant AI has him in her pocket . He cant even use the system without her knowing about it. And it is also mentioned that they have sex when they are in the world. Idc if they do that but that added on with them being MC's 'women'. It is almost like they f#ck mc to control him emotionally and then hop into the world and have a good life with other guys. Also the story can still go on even if the MC is not there.
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    VampyreGod
    10
    Just an idea: What if the keeper defeated or created another world? This should be a dragon world, dragonkin world or something like dragon lords(like in GOT), except strongly based on dragon powers) or something similar, dragons are the embodiment of power(it could be clearly seen in Chapter 852: A lonely tower). Dragons could be the same as centaurs, 10 basic dragons like; fire, ice, white, black etc. With 99% chance, while 1% could be the same dragons except higher based like, eternal fire, eternal frost, holy, darkness etc. These dragons should go the Saint energy route(or something thats not ascention)in my opinion the ascention is good, but we havent see enough saint energy routes(i know that the world is only at rank 3 :)), while this could posibly balance them out).
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    marttelas
    11
    good!!! Thanks for your work author. satisfied
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    Homie_Reader
    31
    MC is Truck-kum?
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      Immortal God
      30
      Truck-kun had hit the wrong person. That’s how he accidentally became a God.

      That One Time Truck-kun Accidentally Hit The Wrong Person And Became A God
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    abishek narayanan
    80
    you know, sometimes i have the irresistible impulse to copy the whoel format of the story and make it again with an actualllll awesome hero. I feel u dont need to be a brainy guy or one of those warlock of the magus world MC types to build an awesome world. If he had slowed down time and pored through the system for years and years before he makes a move it will be awesome. I dont get why he is in a rush, the games are not time based but rather when he get to minimum power level. wont it be cooler to take it steady for 5-10 years and get to know the races and make a more personalized choices? He gives all the works to the gods and make it seem like he is an imbecile. And the f#ck he trains for only a couple of days and takes rest for daysss together
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    Immortalyxssine
    00
    Again. Any novels similar to this one, or got 'world creation' as its theme?
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      Genericism
      10
      Right here: https://m.webnovel.com/book/reincarnated-as-a-world_21109425106469205
      Only a little more than 120, and I havent continued after stockpiling, but quite interesting
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        Immortalyxssine
        00
        Webnovel... Paying in coins would be a good way to support the author, but that's if I could...

        Ofc, fast passes work. But that's just... Tiresome
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          Genericism
          20
          No paywall so far
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            Immortalyxssine
            10
            Oh? Thanks then
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          Prche
          10
          True if only we could just watch an ad for each chapter, and while that would be tiring, at least somebody gets paid in the end, and we get the ability to actually see the chapters
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    GridDokja
    40
    Great world building, interesting characters.

    The MC got the sexual part out of his system by chap 30 i think, then it's scarce and omitted, a bit of NTR in my opinion since his godnesses have babies as incarnation with other human. Heck apart from 2, most of the godnesses he created don't even love him out of 7.

    I'm at 151, still no danger of stake, i love the world, but it's so boring you see none of it.

    Overall it's good, but at least when the MC was a horny f#ck stuff happened, now he fixed all his flaws, he's as boring as a married man tamed by his wife, which he can of is to be honest.

    Like seriously why


    Can someone spoil me when the game start, i don't want to keep reading if it's starting at 700.
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    0sayem
    40
    Concept is good but execution bellow average.mc is stupid side characters are also stupid.
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    EnchantBook
    261
    oh boy, where do I begin? Great concept, incredible even, execution? not so good.
    Review from 10 chapters in so no real spoilers.

    Mc becomes a god, but also not. It's more like he's the boss of the gods while still being a normal person. his system-given assistant is omnipotent in his world while he has to ask her about it which is a really strange design choice.

    He puts barely any thought into the decisions he makes, simply winging it. Don't expect a calculative mc here.

    Possibly the biggest issue I have with the novel is the keeper's forum. these gods that control the lives of millions for years, decades or even centuries still act like your everyday neighbor. There's no sense of growth in any character which makes them all seem very fake.
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      KingJake122
      40
      thank you for the review i wish others was as direct as this so i wouldnt waste my time
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      Baum
      30
      DO NOT READ THIS NOVEL
      I've read till about chapter 500 and it still extremely boring.
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