Re: Evolution Online by Yolohy

A novel which had a pretty decent premise. Lots of world building with quite a bit of mystery. Its almost difficult to mess it up, and the author did just that. I read close to 800 chapters. It started out decent, but towards the middle when mc starts fighting the "strong" opponents, the novel takes a nosedive and becomes utter trash.

Mc keeps on taking stupid risks. Mc keeps on falling into these ridiculous, not survivable solutions. Mc then "grits his teeth" and with his bloodshot eyes and woth the power of plot arm.... ahem, with the power of his determination either wins the fight or somehow survives for no reason. This trope is endless. Like he gets this extremely powerful tablet. A impossible to beat enemy targets him because of that. Mc survives due to plot armor. Then mc keeps showing that off every chance he gets. Its irritating.

I usually say atleast read a bit to see if a novel matches your tasts. But this thing, i would say don't waste your time. You will probably like the beginning. But there is no payoff. By the time there was some payoff, the author went full on retard mode and the story has gone to shit.

This was alright at the start but everything after that fell apart and was horrible, not to mention that it took around 800 chapters for author to move on from the game arc… everything got dumbed down and some things do not make any sense anymore. The writing quality also dropped a lot… I tried my best trying to read this but srsly I cant anymore, tricked us at the start

It was actually okay early on but now everything feels wrong

Not bad at times but author can't seem to find a way to connect their story points with out rushing. The story started out well paced the every so often it just rushes through stuff. This issue only seems to get worse as the story goes on, it feels like the reading equivalent of riding with someone trying to learn stick shift.

I seemed to have ventured deeper than the seniors before and came to share my findings.

Its ight

This is the first novel where they actually get around to the game bringing about an apocalypse.But after that its just xianxia higher realm bullshit.

Good junk food but thats about it

The author baits you with a decently written novel (the first 200-210 chapters) then slaps you in the face by turning the mc into a braindead idiot, and then slaps you again by writing one of the dumbest plots developments you'll ever read.
Let's not even talk about how childish, petty and annoying the mc is.
do NOT binge this, you WILL regret it.

'Wish fulfillment' novel for teenagers that just hit puberty and need to save the damsel in distress.
To fulfill their dream of being a hero, constantly.

Rating: 3

author likes to escalate issues to the point where either MC can appear OP against weaklings or 'Deus ex Machina' has to come save him every single time.
MC can only fight NPC mobs and low level players anything stronger he escalates and someone else or something has to come wipe his ass and save him.

Qué patético y decepcionante eres autor