Dungeon Predator던전 포식자

5/5 for me
if there is one thing that could be improved is the leveling system, all people defeating monsters 100-150 more levels themselves regularly was idiotic

Very good fast-paced book with fun concept.

Sadly, he got only * swords, but that's for the best, I guess. At least he created the best ability.

Romantic subplot is very sub, but I liked it.

I have only 1 problem about it off the top of my head - villains and competitors.
They're strong(at least some of them), but he deals with them in 1-2 clashes. The main solution - remove the horny jail, but I like this idea of 'permaban', so I guess it's okay.

A problematic novel but enjoyable nonetheless.

The first problem being "Hyper Intuition" :

1) The way it was introduced and explained:
He woke up from coma and suddenly he has a sharpened 6th sense for no reason which he uses it for anything he can think of through out the story.

I would have liked if instead of this, he was put inside a container capable of keeping his muscles intact(probably by simulating them with electrocity and massage) and then after waking up he would just feel that something is different but he can't put his finger on what exactly; so a bit of time goes by and while walking down the street he is met with a situation distinctly similar to the accident which led to his coma; but this time he somehow "predicts" the danger beforehand and saves the person walking by. Later on to explain this ability of his, he would guess that while being inside the coma, his mind was constantly repeating the accident scene (which he froze and couldn't move) hence reviewing the scene of him dying and not being able to move at the last second leading to awakening this ability calling it "Hyper Intuition".

2)Throughout the story he would be using "Hyper intuition for absolutely anything; describing it as easy to use and whenever he does something (like dodge a sword)
and commenting left and right that he has "Hyper intuition".

Instead of this, the ability should have been more like one which needed a lot of concentration.

3) Not to mention the sword dojo he signed up and got absolutely forgotten later on.

The second problem was with the game:
When one introduces "Mastery level", it's expected to add "comprehension" to the game which most of the novel didn't have this feeling and it was still not the "Free" feeling which I was after( like being able to create your own skill) .

The third problem was the ending and how it was executed:
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2) The way ; I would have wanted them to mention that there were several recordings of the npcs from the game; maybe even a wedding ceremony in the game and specifically hint that these things do exist. I think the way he faced it, despite being more "mature" it was a bit sad and bitter.

3) I wanted to get a confirmation that mc himself can still play at the "TOP" level; though I guess him not being able to is a lot more convincing and logical.

The main thing has finished and now it's just several minor points:

1) No character growth, don't get it twisted; what was portraited in the novel was not exactly what you can call "character growth" but more like "stakes" becoming bigger and him judging that another approach would work better( and then maybe slowly becoming friends... who knows).

2) Mid-way through the novel, the mc would share a point of view where he would comment on how this game has an ending and eventually it would get "terminated" and saying : " I can continue to earn money for 3 to 5 years... no I can earn money to 10 years!"
Kind of mature, rather bitter though( the sentence above is not the exact one he said but still fairly close).

And that's it, hope this was of some help.

Es una novela muy mal escrita y con mucho relleno y aburrida😒

Awesome book the players

is it a good read