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Berserk Stick System by Zontal_Zev

What happens if the game you’ve been playing for a long time turns out to have a world of its... Read more
What happens if the game you’ve been playing for a long time turns out to have a world of its own?



A boy who experienced death in a strange way.

Reincarnated into the eroge game he had played before. Reincarnated as protagonist’s best friend character in the story, who will be killed by protagonist himself to make protagonist strong, doesn’t make him give up, with help of the system he has now.

Watch his journey in conquering the hearts of heroines and saving the world.

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Strict warning!!!!!! if you don’t like where the 10-year-old MC has puppy love. Don’t read this novel. You know, a lot of novels start very young, and mine is one of them. If you’ve ever read Little Tyrant, you’ll understand because my novel was inspired from here. MC started at the age of 9 years.

Warning: This Novel is only FICTION, don’t compare it with the real world.

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Grammar might be a bad thing in this novel but bear with it.

The beginning of the novel is a disaster, this is my first novel, plus English is not my first language.

I hope you guys at least read fast chapters 1-32. I’m sure you won’t regret it.

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[English is not my first language, so if there are any wrong words, please forgive me.] Collapse
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    RogerPrice
    20
    У романа был потенциал жаль что автор забросил
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    Krux
    10
    Anyone knows the discord?
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      HackerSoS
      10
      dropped?
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        Krux
        10
        Been 6 months, looks like it is dropped.
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    Rito65
    22
    Overall 35/100 if ur into harem novels, 5/100 if not
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    Vick
    23
    Not really good. Be it grammar or the story itself. I liked 'Little Tyrant Doesn't Want to Meet with a Bad End' but this is just a rip off.
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    Lixom8076
    11
    Is he continuing it?
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    Landlord6667
    01
    Send me the discord I'd
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    IseCream
    65
    Not really good, the MC get the girls pretty easily there's no sense of accomplishment at all.
    The conquer's path or it seems like I got transmigrated into an eroge is way more better if you seek something from the same genre.
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    Marwak
    202
    extreme extreme harem like every female is there for him to catch
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      DizzyJosh
      263
      gotta catch em all
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    Harem Overlord
    20
    La veré si hay Harem jajaja
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    lihkin
    93
    English is 4/5, not horrendous, but a few mistakes(abt once in 3 chapters) stutter the immersion.
    Story is good as long as you're the target audience, had a good balance of smut/action
    Overall 8/10 if ur into harem novels, 5/10 if not
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      themanbrownie
      33
      I would say the english is a 3/5 at best. You cant go 2 sentences without the sentence sounding off or the grammar just being bad.
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        lihkin
        122
        Maybe I'm just used to horrid english lol
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