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Immortal In The Magic World巫师世界的永生者

Eli was transmigrated to a world of magic and became immortal.

He had endless life and... Read more
Eli was transmigrated to a world of magic and became immortal.

He had endless life and could never die.

“Huh? I’m talentless? Then, I’ll just train for as long as I need, even if it takes 1000 years. That should be enough for me to become strong.”

“The skill is hard to learn? Then, I’ll take a few dozens of years to research it. There’s no way it’s that hard, right?”

“What? I can sacrifice my life force to gain spirit power? That’s a bargain!”

“The enemy is here? Hell, I’ll just hide for 10000 years. Let’s see if he can outlive me. I’ll come out once he’s dead.”

This is the story of an immortal who first struggled to live in the world of magic until he became strong enough to slaughter endless worlds. Collapse
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    Mac
    Mac
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    A nice and chill time waster but it suddenly ended. Prolly got axed or author had health problems so would recommend you don't read.
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    Immortal King
    10
    Its a good story friends but i would recommend not to read it as it was abruptly ended due to stuff in authors life.
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    lucasjcastelo
    10
    Is this a slice of life?
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    Darkmoon
    10
    Well time to read this again I dropped it while I was stacking chapters
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    Listless
    10
    Quote: Listless
    Why no update for 6 days????

    Edit:16 days
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      Srijan
      11
      Edit : 25 days
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    Listless
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    Why no update for 6 days????
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      TIMELORD
      00
      Preparing for the ending, last 2 chapter's.
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        Listless
        20
        What?? The novel is ending!?
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          Alterg9709
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          its end in chap 580 i think its in webnovel
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            Listless
            10
            I thought there'll be at least 200-399 ch more
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    Black Sovereign
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    If you ignore the spelling errors and punctuation, this novel is pretty good.👍🏽
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    BRAGO
    184
    Man this shit is Incomparable to WMW
    MC looks down on warlocks just because he can use Mage techniques due to his immortality, just like the narcissistic mage with the shadow dragon totally disregarding the fact that the mages had to run away and the people who couldn't leave created a whole system of cultivation and strengthened themselves.
    The naming is a mess as well, mostly its a western name but some times its eastern mainly chinese lol
    On top of that too much space is wasted on presenting the greatness of mc with words that is, he is looked down upon then the person will realise ELI is so great, his position blah blah blah
    What baffled me more was reaction of Vivika the apprentice of mc, she's supposed to be an 400year old witch but behaves like a shy child, not only that she even cries remembering her teacher lol this is pathetic, this is not how I imagined the magus world to be. It gets even more pathetic ahead just like any chinese novel
    His enemies will first look down on him and spout blah blah blah which takes up a whole chapter, then they'll be astonished, then afraid as he unveils his powers, then they'll be filled with despair n regret and apologize, same troupe used 4-5 times now its boring
    Shook his head, frown, shook his head, frown, sighed, shook his head, sighed, frowned, these are used again n again tsk on top of that we've 'Calm Protagonist' in tags the irony
    This novel is rather childish
    Now the good part
    Mc hasn't compromised with his safety for anything be it benefits, emotion or his subordinates
    Readable and enjoyable as the MC got his priorities clear, he isn't obsessed over emotion rather benefits and strength is more desired by him. He is rational and definitely not the justice type infact he has used forbidden techniques to empower himself,
    Side characters might feel a little light as it goes with majority of novels but the character of mc is solid which is cautious yet ruthless and very much celf centered
    Once he even put a soul seal inside a child cause the child Ross came to know his secret of course the child wasn't ordinary he was an acyolite.
    MC follows both the ways of Warlocks and mages.
    2.5⭐️ out of 5⭐️
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    Another troupe
    All kinds of depised cucks and weaklings flock around mc he saves them, they realise his greatness, then they're again despised now mc will show his strength again which will earn him their loyalty, easy peasy chinese novel
    Like I said earlier this is a childish novel for instance read this paragraph

    She just had to speak one line that Eli is a Radiant Sun warlock but she spouted all kind of nonsense and even got despised
    Man in chinese novels characters do lack basic intelligence but not to this extent,
    This is just another way of increasing chapter and... whatever I'm outta this dung
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      Zambo_Yagami
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      MC looks down on warlocks
      Bruh he literally created an organisation for the sole purpose of becoming a strong warlock, what the hell are you talking about?
      The naming is a mess as well, mostly its a western name but some times its eastern mainly chinese lol
      On top of that too much space is wasted on presenting the greatness of mc with words that is, he is looked down upon then the person will realise ELI is so great, his position blah blah blah

      True, In my opinion this kind of thing can be summerised in a review as chinese novel quality writing (CNQW) and/or the suggestion to readers to 'turn your brain off'.
      Vivika the apprentice of mc, she's supposed to be an 400year old witch but behaves like a shy child, not only that she even cries remembering her teacher lol this is pathetic, this is not how I imagined the magus world to be.
      This isn't the magus world and she's not a magus. Emotions are pretty key to characters being anything other than mindless, emotionless robots. Personally, I'd be bored to hell if she barely reacted. After all, the MC should've died hundreds of years ago. Anywho, personally I wouldn't include this into a review because I don't imagine many people care about that, especially considering how far into the story that is. I guess you could summerise that into something like, 'Relatively emotional side characters. Anyone like BRAGO be warned.' (I don't know what kind of tastes in character personalities you and thus others like you are looking for, so I'll just use yourself as an example. Feel free to fill in the gaps).
      His enemies will first look down on him and spout blah blah
      And everything in between until
      This novel is rather childish
      = CNQW.
      Once he even put a soul seal inside a child cause the child Ross came to know his secret of course the child wasn't ordinary he was an acyolite.
      Even as a reader I was confused about this for a good second. In my opinion an unnecessary example.
      All kinds of depised cucks and weaklings flock around mc he saves them, they realise his greatness, then they're again despised now mc will show his strength again which will earn him their loyalty, easy peasy chinese novel
      = CNQW.
      Spoiler thing +
      She just had to speak one line that Eli is a Radiant Sun warlock but she spouted all kind of nonsense and even got despised
      Man in chinese novels characters do lack basic intelligence but not to this extent,
      This is just another way of increasing chapter and... whatever I'm outta this dung
      = CNQW.
      I decided to review your review because I had time to waste and think your review was relatively bad. The second half seems fine, but your critisism was literally just you ranting and just like the ranting CNQW in these stories, I usually just skim through it. Overall I think your review should be put onto 'offtopic' until you fix it because if I were looking through reviews to decide whether or not I'd read something, your review is the kind I skip.
      :P
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    Imreallybored
    30
    There is quite a big plothole in later chapters:

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      Shiki519
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      and i really thought it was a BIG plothole.. the heck..
      not to offend or maybe im wrong, i only read quite a bit, but all of these can be technically just ur opinion
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        Imreallybored
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        It's an opinion, but it's based on facts. What I described is what I think is the logical effect his skill has based on the information the enemy has on it.

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          Stomper621
          40
          There is your problem. Why would you ever assume that a Chinese Webnovel would ever have some semblance of "Logic"? You must be new.
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      LollipoPReapeR
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      I wouldn’t call this a plothole. Just authors selectively nerfing/forgetting skills/solutions for a problem at hand. It’s something we see all too much :(
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      PrinceCain
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      Well dude, as you said, the cloning technique is based on his faith power. If Eli shows weakness the faith of his followers will weaken, also faith power is not unlimited, only his lifespan. And Eli is basically too lazy to commit massacre
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    Rimurupusik
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    #panic# update
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