Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse by XIETIAN

I think this Novel needs an unreliable narrator tag as author just cant seem to narrate a story properly always keeps stuff hidden for various reasons

YES.........

MC still 1st order?

guys its me the enlightened perverted daoist here to bestow a review on a novel i once really liked hmmmm lets get started [plz dont mind my spelling]

so the first few chapters of this story were cliche but i really liked them for what they were and the introduction of the soul record to me was really unique as b4 this ive never read a series with a similar system ps[after i dropped the i read all of everyone else is a returneee the systems are really simlar] i like lilith introduction in the story and her mysteriousness at the time it was kinda alluring and i also really like BZ powers it made for unique situations eg[during an later arc where he killed a horde of spiders in a single attack] i really liked BZ personal skill stone heart but it was later ruined at least for me maybe not for some people at first BZ had and unaprochable loner kinda vibe but actually not loner he was rational and with Lilith acting as his guide in the new world was fun also the reason she was helping him and the payback she wanted from him later was very intriging as it can be used to develop thier relationship and finally make them help each other and example could be BZ was one day in danger and was trying to hard to get strong quick to help lillith and maybe they further bonded over that like prob lillith would get him out of a slump he would have prob started liking her and later down the line she realizes the like BZ too and tells him the full story of why she needs him and they fall in love natrurally instead of the weird artifical way the fell in love it makes it seem like lillith saw bai zemins potential and decided to take advatage of him cuz ngl zemin and lillith dont seem compatible kinda at all cuz we dont know anything about her that was one of my problems
the next one is how dumb the whole acr about meeting his parents were like he has been saying he needs to hurry to meet his parents but shitty filler and trash arcs happen lol and when he decides to finally go to then another dumb thing happens and wastes even more time lol it shouldnt have taken that long nother dumb this is the time it takes bai zemin to elvole from unevoled to first order 92 chapter to be excact and now your telling me 800 plus chaps later and he is not second order like bruh another thing i really f#cking hate also are the women descriptions like jesus f#cking christ as eat eating ate said this guy has never touched a women in his life i understand it fantasy but chill the descriptions for the girls always take up at least 3 paragraphs repeating the same shit also another this i hate is how at the start authour said no harem he should have made the story harem from the start instead of just changing the story based on the f#cking kids telling him to do so look i dont hate harem my name is perverted daoist lol but come on man a thing i realized to its actually not just the kids in the comments fault he changed the story its his too cuz he gave shanguan bingzue and bai zemin such decent chemistry and it was way more fleshed out that the other fmls another thing i hate is how bZ devolves in to a basic protagonist after losing stone heart and becomes a horny f#ck like in the latest chap rn he feeling up SB in the dark and wondering if he should stop when his so called soulmate is right there also i f#cking hate how the tensions of moments can be ruined due to stupidity like when in the middle of f#cking war that dump princess i cant be bothered to researsh her name chased Bz down while in a towel after he accidentaly saw her showereing and instead of thot slapping the f#cking bitch away he take her and spanks her is that supposed to make me laugh no f#cking way my guy and i also hate that dumb f#cking special eyes cliche where the dumb women can see their future husband that usally only appears in dumb japanese trashsekai like in another world with my f#cking smart phone u know what bai zemin is just a japanese protag now with just red hair instead of black lol collecting bitches like pokeballs gotta catch them alllllll ugh swear the only redeeming wuality about this sotory are its 5\10 world building and underlying mystery even the unique fights got kinda drab as we know he is just gonna win lol im not even finished with my reveiew but i spent 30 mins writing this ima stop here if u read all this your a legend but honestly i rate this story 4\10 now its like junk food its bad for u but some ppl still like it

I can confidently say that the author has never touched a woman

Any decent novel like this one? (Or at least similar)

This novel became a cycle of seeing how the main character grew non-stop and showing that he had it bigger than all, the first 300-500 chapters are quite acceptable but it declines a lot after 600 and the main character goes from being annoying but entertaining an annoying and generic protagonist, you can tell from miles that the author only writes the story for the money.

I'm not going to cut myself. At first I thought it would suck, but after 900 chapters it still doesn't get past the first order. And from what the author commented a few days ago, it doesn't seem like it will be soon. Please, if you even think that the novel will be 5000 chapters, being the evolution of BZ about 2000 or more.

This is not normal, every time he has the opportunity he fills it up again, prolonging it more and more, with childish plot excuses. In the end he will get the readers to tire of him. And seriously, now BZ is like a god so to speak, he kills even the fourth order like nothing. I sincerely believe that the author has gotten out of hand by far. He goes more for the money he gets for his "success" of the novel than for the interest of the reader. I don't think it will last long as a "success"

Abandon it if you are reading it because you are going to regret it. It is putting filler in a bag without improving anything. And let's not talk about the female characters. It's like novels where there were only women and hardly any men, as if everything revolved around the beauty of women. God, sometimes I think that this author has never had a match with the descriptions of him. Are all Chinese like this? Because the truth is, I don't think I've ever seen a Chinese Miss Universe. In short, shit. Tuck, tuck, tuck endless stuffing. No evolution.

So i couldn't take it anymore.As I didn't saw anyone mention this plot hole


Oh yeah btw let's celebrate the incoming nationalism. And author says it is in a different earth,which can't be explained by our one
Kudos to him , he deserves a round of applause
I just don't understand, is it a universal law that china should have its "3 kingdom's war" or what shit-not and now china vs Russia in most of the Chinese authors novel?