Dragonborn Saga by Don_dokhmesy

To confirm a theory: Whenever you add chinese b*llcrap to a perfect world or -cuNtivation idiocy- it becomes sh*t. This is a prime example of it. a world like TES-Skyrim becomes a moronic joke after the mentally challenged thing called the author adds chinese idiocy. As if it is not enough he tries to justifies it with examples of greybeards and/or Psijic mages.

At first the story was cool and interesting but after meeting Augur and aquiring a system things start turning uglier. The second pivotal point is cultivation thingy that made the ff even worse. Now some people may say 'it's not that bad, cultivation is cool, I love chinese fantasy' but that's not the case in this ff. Why? Cuz only mc and his associates know how to cultivate so mc starts getting OP and trample on his foes like they're ants. Yes there're some biggies like psyjics and old Telvany mages but they're not his enemies so he gets no hardships and the story has become dull.

the author really messed it up with Lesbo-Harem, the mc's love interests have morphed out of nowhere, have sex without him and seem to prefer each other over the mc.

(as of Chapter 250)

This is probably one of the better fanfics that I have read. The author really knows Skyrim and TES in general, to the point that it makes me want to play all the games(I've only played Skyrim before but I'll be playing the others soon is they just went on discount with Quakecon).

There's some problems that I see others having with the game, but personally, I don't think it's that big of a deal. For instance, there is a Chinese-like cultivation that the MC does. It might seem out of place with it happening from pretty much the very beginning, but much later it actually states it's a semi-canon with the Psijic Order and people like the Grey-beards meditating to gain some form of power. It also is stated in lore that the planet was created but two beings that represent Order and Chaos (Yin and Yang) interplaying. There's also the fact that the game doesn't start for a long time (I think it starts around Chapter 500). I don't see a problem with that since Dragons are supposed to be realistic and there is no way the MC will be able to kill a dragon at level 5 with basic gear like in the game. There is also a system, though it doesn't come until much later and the MC gets it by connecting his soul with another being that I won't name. It doesn't do anything other than show his stats, skills, and equipped items. Someone else mentioned that it is a bit weird that some people talk like they are from the modern world. It mainly comes from the fact the MC uses that language so of course people are going to pick up on it after hearing it for 10 years. Plus, the MC doesn't hide the fact that he had a past life and knows that dragons are coming. Nobody believes him, but the MC doesn't mind since then he will be able to prank everybody when the dragons do show up.

Everything else about the novel is pretty good. I don't mind any of the previously mentioned problems but they are something I can see other people worrying about or not liking.

Everyone speaks like they're from this world. So it reads like Skyrim the action movie rather than an attempt at Skyrim fanfiction. It's not necessarily bad, but it just went too much over the "unbelievable" for me. I don't mind that author added a bunch of stuff, but when everyone starts speaking like modern teenagers, it just feels like there's something wrong.

Your millage may vary, it's OP MC so if you like that type of stuff, go for it.

"♫ Laaaaaaaa, Laaa, Laaaa, Laaaaaaaaaa, ♫

♫ Gotta pee, Gotta pee, we'll rock this party. ♫

♫ For the night, for the food, for we are not drunk. ♫

♫ Has Alina found out? We are not in our beds? ♫

♫ Not me! Or the peeps! Or the guards will cry! ♫

♫ *Musical rumbling* ♫

♫ USE A FOOORK! THANK THE LOOORD! WAS IT GOOOOD? OH MY GOD! ♫

♫ AND THE CHEESE OH! ABELLA! A BOOOOOB! ♫

♫ Was it Wulfur who stabbed my butt... with a fork? ♫

♫ Gotta pee, Gotta pee, we'll rock this party. ♫

♫ For the night, for the food, for we are not drunk. ♫

♫ Has Alina found out? We are not in our beds? ♫

♫ Not me! Or the peeps! Or the guards will cry! ♫

♫ PARTY! PARTY PARTY! ♫

♫ RUFF! ♫

♫ PARTY! PARTY PARTY! ♫

♫ RUFF! ♫"

https://youtu.be/cSBCaGRILJI?t=24


I can never enter skyrim again without hearing the totally butchered lyrics

Is this dropped or what?

Been so long since I forgot a out it even though I had 400 chapters in. I loved it it's a great novel for me it's a 9.5/10 it's had a great character development and story the mc is portrayed as op or extremely strong until he has to fight a dragon and bearly wins with all his allies. Of course it has some flaws but can't remember them since its been over a year. The main story is based on skyrim(or elder scrolls 5 if you prefer).

Отчасти неплохо даже без системы.
Но если сравнить с такой же работой, только по ведьмаку - небо и земля разница