In Naruto: Reborn with Talent by KasiCair

I'm curious, I've seen several fanfics with FMC as Pakura, don't get me wrong, it's easy on the eyes, but although not I consider myself an expert in Naruto I don't remember seeing it more than two or three times in the cannon, it was so memorable for others?

Naruto fans: Unless you are here exclusively for harem and r18 content, dont read this trash. Better try...

Konoha Hypocrite: Dark themed, Anti-Hero MC, Indept look into Naruto world without power of love/friendship. Realisitc characters driven by money, greed, power etc..

Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan: Retelling of naruto story with MC from hyuga bloodline. Deep dive into filler/movie lores. Meddlesome MC who makes alot of changes to the timeline and it become a story of it own in the later chapters.

#panic#, please upload a pdf bro.....

This started off alright, being grim and realistic but it tries so hard to be dark that it sounds dumb sometimes.
Allot of characters are flat, cartoonishly evil and or idiotic to make the MC look better.

I dropped it because I didn't even care for the chapters with the MC and his harem anymore. The ones with naruto and anko were more interesting, I think it's because having a big harem and needing to have moments with all the members gets old after a bit.

Tho I'll admit what grated on me the most is just how much grooming the MC does and how close to brainwashing it is.(Idc if it's not him personally preparing them, it's still pretty freaking weird lmao)

readers in webnovel are so stupid, there was a group of people in webnovel who complained that this novel is not good and thats perfectly normal people have different taste, but one fanboy said that and he gained 49 likes for that comment, WTF? how can a group of people be so stupid? now days you can't criticize a novel because you are not a Author? how fooking stupid can a human being be? I can't even believe that 49 people agreed with his comment, some time ago I saw some comments saying that people in webnovel are ret#rds and have tra#h taste, I was not believing that at that time but now I believe that what they said is absolutely true. some people in webnovel are so stupid they have the brain of a 10 year old child who is mentally ill.

i am crazy or it was kumogakure and they switched to kirigakure?

the world building is good the rest i don`t care to much very good if you don`t care to plot details

there is no development of the female characters, they all look the same, just change the name, I don't recommend it...

I remember dropping this because how ridiculous things like the soul bound thing that shared his talents to his harem, Hanzo naming the legendary 3 sannin plothole, Tsunade way too much difference in personality and mentality. Mc being obsessively inlove with his student (sword user) he didn't let go of his feelings even though she's practically brainwashed, she's not worthy and he already had Konan and Tsunade so I don't get why he held his feelings that long so it gives me that Pokémon vibes or he has that kind of fetish. Mei training for a few years and managed to massacre ninjas like ants while slandering Naruto and Sasuke for being OP in a few years even though they have the background and plot armor to back it up but somehow Mei being trained by an OP teacher makes the student the same level OP as well (Tobirama begs to differ even his students weren't all OP) which is literally broken logic as mc is basically a broken Hagoromo Ōtsutsuki without that sharing chakra bs. Ninjas raping civilians which is mention repeatedly, Mist shinobi tranfering 3 tails but Anbu and Ninjas were having sex and playing cards which considering how important the missions was illogical or just the author saying all ninjas are just sex craved beast and not serious at their missions, mandatory deflowering in female ninjas at the age of 10 (doesn't make sense how genins or young ninjas were showed to be extremely pure in interacting with the opposite sex in the anime so I guess the author adding real ninja logic to anime ninjas), comparing real life ninjas habits and traits to Naruto ninjas in how they're stupid in wearing bright orange clothes, akatsuki wearing uniforms, kunoichi should be killer whores and etc which is stupid in adding logical real world reasoning in an Anime world were some facts in that world were introduced by the original creator of naruto Kishimito just to make it seem that the author was knowledgeable or has a unique way of showcasing his views in Naruto should be. I dropped this a few months ago so I don't know if I got everything right but if you're a real Naruto fan then don't get your views twisted or just don't compare this to the original as this fanfic showcases realism in a bad way for me.

dropped at: ch. 54

the ideas on how jutsu work are novel takes, and i applaud the author for it - although sometimes he outrightly denies what has already been stated by kishimoto himself (naruto's author) so it can fit his narrative. which is kinda irritating but meh.
now for the plot itself. things that happened in the anime/ manga are incredibly skewed so that they go towards furthering the novels plot, and imo that's quite honestly a stupid idea because said plot can quite feasibly be achieved without making characters people already know and love disgusting variants of themselves: hanzo never actually named the sannin "legendary", he just called them sannin (lit: three nin) in a bid to deride them, younger orochimaru is apparently a shotacon, younger jiraiya apparently sticks his dick into anything that walks and has a vagina, younger dan was apparently tasked with going after tsunade by hiruzen and never actually loved her, all of these are things i've found after 15 chapters and this is just what i remember.
so well. if you're a true naruto fan and won't tolerate slander, then i suggest that you don't pick up this novel because it'll probably make you want to track down the author irl. if you're here for the vibes, then give it a try i guess.
also. the author has made every male ninja a sex-starved beast, while female ninja apparently have to sell their bodies to get up the heirachy.
this novel will be best enjoyed by someone with little to no knowledge about naruto.
give it a try.

I cant say much about novel but writing style is absolutely horrible